Content: 3/3 - A very interesting read and interview on the rightful heir to the throne of England. This is a perfect character for you to base your career off and I do hope you keep it going. Fun times ahead. I like the fact that you have a list of VHL teams you will not sign for. If it keeps you around, then why the fuck not, right? But who are they!?
Grammar: 1.5/2 - This grade could have been lower if the article weren't as long as it was. There were a lot of basic punctuation mistakes. Just one proof-read would catch these. - Well hello out there for all of you that don’t know me my name is Tina Gregory = Well hell out there. For all of you who don't know me, my name is Tina Gregory - afternoon to much of = afternoon. To much of - meat, and told = meat and told - in, I walked = in. I walked - I was lead but = I was led by - strippers were = strippers who were - bigger then = bigger than - This maybe a = This may be a - team mate = teammate
Appearance: 1/1 - Consistent style with colours, pictures, alignments, and italics - nothing more needed!
Overall: 5.5/6