fromtheinside 1,290 Posted December 14, 2021 Share Posted December 14, 2021 JardyB10, Horcrux, Girts and 4 others 7 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
BOOM 8,759 Posted December 14, 2021 Share Posted December 14, 2021 Better than my attempt at making a media spot. comrade cat and fromtheinside 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-894895 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaikoku-hito 2,089 Posted December 14, 2021 Share Posted December 14, 2021 Review: Based on the title I expected so see a few stick-men with some weird sticks and skates but I was actually surprised that the graphic isn`t that bad. I also don`t know the main player render meaning you had me guess and still guessing to figure out the actual player. I am guess Calgary Flame; which I think I am wrong as I really don`t know the team at all any more that I am living in Japan; get my hockey highlights a day late and they are sportsnet horrible cuts of highlights. Other then guessing the main render I actually find it funny that you used both Toronto and Edmonton in the background was a bit eye catching for something that shouldn`t have been. I am starting to waffle on and on now so here is my final score. Overall: 8/10 as I like when some tries something new. tinafrombobsburgers and fromtheinside 1 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-894899 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fromtheinside 1,290 Posted December 14, 2021 Author Share Posted December 14, 2021 11 hours ago, Gaikoku-hito said: Review: Based on the title I expected so see a few stick-men with some weird sticks and skates but I was actually surprised that the graphic isn`t that bad. I also don`t know the main player render meaning you had me guess and still guessing to figure out the actual player. I am guess Calgary Flame; which I think I am wrong as I really don`t know the team at all any more that I am living in Japan; get my hockey highlights a day late and they are sportsnet horrible cuts of highlights. Other then guessing the main render I actually find it funny that you used both Toronto and Edmonton in the background was a bit eye catching for something that shouldn`t have been. I am starting to waffle on and on now so here is my final score. Overall: 8/10 as I like when some tries something new. Sabres was the OG render Gaikoku-hito 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-895095 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaikoku-hito 2,089 Posted December 15, 2021 Share Posted December 15, 2021 5 hours ago, fromtheinside said: Sabres was the OG render That was my second guess due to the gold bands on the jersey!! fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-895186 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horcrux 322 Posted December 15, 2021 Share Posted December 15, 2021 REVIEW for a first graphic I think it is very well done, you have the clear player, their is a jersey swap which is nice to see. This is however very green lol. The background could use a stock or two to blend the images together some, so we dont see 4 squares, for the text and placement of the players I think given the size you did that extremely well. aside from a few stocks on the Background and the player this is super well done. Grade: 8/10 fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-895478 Share on other sites More sharing options...
tinafrombobsburgers 367 Posted December 16, 2021 Share Posted December 16, 2021 I feel bamboozled! This is a great graphic! Render is clear and with the colour and logo swap it really pops off the page! Love the font choice and how it works with your colours! Not sure I love the placement of “defenceman” but not a big deal overall! Also if you changed the leafs logo in the background to match Malmo this would be perfect! Great work ! 9/10 fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-895616 Share on other sites More sharing options...
npuBeT 87 Posted December 16, 2021 Share Posted December 16, 2021 A simple and calm picture, nothing superfluous distracts from the player, everything is on the case. The color combination is very good. The only thing I didn't immediately understand is that the background is not just green)))) 9/10 fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-895637 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaming Ringleader 246 Posted December 17, 2021 Share Posted December 17, 2021 This is so pathetic, why would you even embarrass yourself to make this. JUST KIDDING lol. This is actually a really solid graphic, the player is big, text is perfect and the background has some calm stuff going around in it, for that I will have to give you the golden rating of the week, the 69/420 (10/10) fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-895864 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tape-to-Tape 298 Posted December 17, 2021 Share Posted December 17, 2021 Reviewing. This is not pathetic at all. I actually think this graphic is eye catching and stays on theme well enough. The render is good quality, you have a good logo swap and the text is cleat and does not clash. Good job and keep it up, tour skills will continue to improve. Rating this an 8/10. fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-895878 Share on other sites More sharing options...
qripll 502 Posted December 17, 2021 Share Posted December 17, 2021 Review: It's a nice one that I like to comment. It really appeals to me, talking about the concept I'd like to state that this collage looks cool. The green colour render is also pretty nice. Logo swap is almost clean and smooth, you had better to practice it a bit more. Font is ok, the whole graphic seems like a good work. 7/10 fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-896013 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vat 234 Posted December 19, 2021 Share Posted December 19, 2021 Review: For a first graphic this is absolutely amazing! Looks like you have had tons of experience before. The colors fit very well except for the yellow stripes on the jersey, other than that there's not much to complain about. A small thing is that I would've liked it if the text was incased in a box like the 3 other images are, other than that this is amazing! 8/10 fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-896581 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Bohannan 116 Posted December 20, 2021 Share Posted December 20, 2021 First of all it is good to see that you're self critical and know that your skills are not the best. That being said - wow! Although you said this is your pathetic attempt, this attempt is way better than some of the other stating graphic designers. You did a lot of things in the piece and I cannot say nothing bad about it, so good job mate! Continue the same way and you will learn and become better at what you do. Rating: 7/10 fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-896612 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank 5,212 Posted December 20, 2021 Share Posted December 20, 2021 Review: Better then a lot of graphics I've seen here. The logo swap is well done. The colour change to green was nice but I feel like the yellow should be navy. The background layout is interesting but it's also compensating in the top right for poorly placed text. I'd move the text to the left of the render and make it all tighter. Smaller size font for defenseman would be nice as well. Overall 7/10 fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-896628 Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemonan 49 Posted December 20, 2021 Share Posted December 20, 2021 Review: Honestly, this is nothing short of a great first attempt. I love the different shades of green color scheme and the overall design is great. The font and placement is great, and the choice of photos is great. My one complaint is that the logo and helmet is not super well photoshopped onto the piece. Overall very good! 7/10 fromtheinside 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/113389-my-pathetic-attempt-at-making-a-graphic/#findComment-896630 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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