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Now that the Lynx season and playoffs have come to an end. Mr. Pablo Escabar has some busy weeks ahead of him. The first question that come to his mind is where will I be drafted. What VHL team will I be calling home? Its gonna be a nerve racking time waiting and being patient. Almost like a little kid on Christmas waiting for his parents to wake up. With that being said a lot of eyes are on Pablo regarding the upcoming draft. Therefore there is no break for him. Pablo has been training harder and practicing even more frequently than before. There is no break time for a player well coordinated like Mr. Edcabar. There are plans and goals that have to be reached. With only so little time to complete them that leaves no relaxing or free time for Pablo. Pablo can't wait to be welcomed onto a franchise and tier up the league on the ice. Its going to be a long and time consuming thing to do, but Pablo Escabar plans on being a top defender in the VHL within his third to fourth season. Hopefully there are some great eyes our there that can see if as clear as we do. If so get your draftee asap

Context: 3/3 - Everything is good. Great podcast and I enjoyed the discussion. No way Vancouver is winning the Stanley Cup. stayed on topic. Professionalism: 2/2 - Everything sounds great. Editing: 1/1 - music was not really my taste by still acceptable Overall: 6/6 Keep up the great Podcast show guys its awesome. Great appearance Bushito great to see ya getting involved!

4-3 Storm

Game 3: Storm Game 3: Blades Game 4: Storm Game 4: Blades

Content: 3/3 - Careful very close to the minimum required words. Other than that good job. Sounds like you had a great season. Grammar: 2/2 nothing sever. Just the Canadian and American spelling differences. Appearance: 1/1- looks good. The quoted font is a little small though. Final 6/6

Content: 3/3- good interview based article. Good luck in the upcoming draft, perhaps we will continue to be team-mates, Grammar: 2/2- just one really weird one. i´m more than happy to play in that team and do my best. ---> i'm more than happy to play on that team and do my best. Appearance: 1/1- Looks great man keep it up. Final 6/6

Content: 3/3- Good interview based article. Keep up the good work. Grammar: 2/2- Not bad. Appearance: 1/1- I am gonna give you the mark this time. Next article if you can have the text the average font size that would be much appreciated not only by me but the other graders. Make it hard to focus on. Had to squint to read it lol. Final 6/6

The Ottawa Lynx had an amazing season this year. Although they did not bring the cup back with them to Ottawa they still came back happy. Looking back it started out slow with a group of guys not knowing anything about each other. After a few long weeks, real time, they started to get comfortable being around one another. A brotherhood was made. The team knew that being individual meat heads would not get them far, so instead they grew a strong army that was hungry. The results to this act was beautiful. The Ottawa Lynx went on a huge winning streak. For the first half of the season Frank was the general manager. Frank had a very strong and positive energy always buzzing in the locker room. Players were always in there talking to each other, and helping each other out around the boards. Unfortunately Frank had a lot going on in the real world, it was a bummer but very understandable. The Lynx players said their good byes and thanked Frank for drafting them and being such an amazing person. When Frank left he was replaced with the all high and mighty banning machine Sterling. The Ottawa Lynx players did not know how it would be with anyone else leading their charge. They were nervous, even scared. After awhile things started going great, they were done differently, but it was still great to be playing for the organization. Sterling hired Mr. Escabar has the Ottawa Lynx assistant general manager shortly after. Nearing the end of the regular season the Lynx were sitting in a playoff spot comfortably. With this being so, Sterling made a very nice choice that helped his team out. The Ottawa Lynx switched around their lines to give the more quiet players a chance to get their stats up so they could get a nice achievement tracker reward. Sterling was really good with looking after all the player on his team. With the playoffs starting the players were getting very excited. They were going up against the Minot Gladiators in the first round. The Gladiators had a very good team. Leading the team in scoring Vogan Jeltz and the brick wall Hans Wingate. The Ottawa Lynx knew the battle would not be easy. A lot of practice was prepared for the series. When the series finally started it was exactly what the Lynx expected. The series bounced back and forth. Each team took turns winning every other game. The series was pushed all the way to game seven. The VHLM had the game scheduled two days later from game six so both teams were well rested and ready to give it their all. Game seven finally arrived on April 10th, 2015. It was a very good game from start to finish. Both teams fought until the very end. Unfortunately the Gladiators beat the Ottawa Lynx out of the playoffs. Forcing them to get their golf clubs out until the start of the next season. With the VHL draft now around the corner the Ottawa Lynx players have their head held very high as the biggest night of their lives is coming up. This night will debate where some of them will be playing next season and where some will be the following season. "I Personally want to thank the Ottawa Lynx organization for such a great year and all the crazy adventure" - Pablo Escabar

New York Rangers, born and raised. Although I live in Canada.

3-1 Titans

Americans Titans Meute Titans

Lynx 5-4

game 7!

Passed Francis York Morgan looks like he didn't put up much of a fight

Gladiators Royals Lynx Royals

Big woop the final grade is the final grade . 6/6

Content: 2/2 - Careful next time. You were just barely over the required words. Other than that it was a good read. Grammar: 2/2- nothing noticeable. Appearance: 1/1- Title and a picture. Final 6/6

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Content: 2/2 - Very good article. Sorry to hear about the retirement. So soak up the sun on a sunny beach somewhere south! Grammar: 2/2- Nothing I could see. Appearance: 1/1 - Title matches the article. Great pictures. Final 6/6

Content : 2/2 - Was a really good article. hey maybe we both will be on the same team, never know. Good luck in the upcoming draft! Grammar: 2/2 - Few minor spelling mistakes. teammate x2------> team mate, or team-mate. deadlifting ------> Two seperate words; dead lifting labeled -------> Labelled. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks great. You did a great job. Just pre read the article before posting to catch those easy mistakes! Final 6/6

Americans Express Americans Express

3-2 Cologne

With the playoffs coming around the corning everyone is getting excited. The snow is melting and the prostitutes are dressing more slutty. All the hunnies are lining up for the boys out side the arena's. Unfortunately one player recently broke in and went in for the kill. No one normally gives in but this time Slaughter did. After a few days Slaughter went to the Americans trainer and complained that his crotch was constantly on fire and was irritating him beyond explanation. Unfortunately there was nothing that the trainer could do for Slaughter, he would have to go to the medical clinic. After his check up, Slaughter was informed that "Candy" had given him Chlamydia. Slaughter now has to take pills for his recovery as well has put a cooling cream on his genitals. Everyone please pray for his recovery, donations are being tallied at the door on the way out to help him with his hard time. We advice that the players stay away from the Lot Lizards.

Context: 3/3 - Everything is good. Great podcast and I enjoyed the discussion. Really enjoyed the shout out about me in the upcoming draft. The VHL playoffs are looking pretty strong. Great discussion on the recreates as well. Professionalism: 2/2 - Everything sounds great. Editing: 1/1 - Cool music. Overall: 6/6 Keep up the great Podcast show guys its awesome.

Content: 2/2- Good article buddy. Minot is a good strong team. Grammar 2/2- Nothing I could see, it looked like peaches and cream! Appearance: 1/1- good title, really like how you quote when people are talking. Keep up the good work. Final 6/6