Effort: 2/2 - Slow down! Love all the work you've been putting out recently.
Look: 3/3 - So...text. I'd try something like Arial, size 12 or 14 and in all-caps. Keep it simple, just red on the blue background, and not rotated. Other than that, this is gorgeous. Good lighting, love the red-blue contrast. Maybe a little over-topazed? Try to avoid getting the cartoony look and use black and white soft brushes on Soft Light to create dynamics on the render.
Creativity: 1/1 - Nice use of strokes, good composition.
Total: 6/6
Final: 6/6