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  1. Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, lighting, colouring, text work. Nice job. Look: 2.75/3 - Almost full marks. Love the lighting and colouring, and the composition. Text could be blended in a bit more though, it sticks out a bit too much. Keep it up. Creativity: 1/1 - Cool render to use, and nicely done. Total: 5.75/6
  2. Effort: 2/2 - Enough was done here. Look: 2.5/3 - Strong points are the text and the overall "look", but the lighting is sort of lacklustre and some of the stock work is a bit off. Maybe try distorting the outer stock work, or overlaying some gritty textures to blend them in more. Very cool sig though. Creativity: 1/1 - purple Total: 5.5/6
  3. Effort: 2/2 - As usual. Look: 2.75/3 - I don't really like the web 2.0 diagonal effect, but other than that this is sweet. Great colouring and lighting, nice effects and nice text. Nice work. Creativity: 1/1 - For sure. Total: 5.75/6
  4. Effort: 2/2 - Definitely, keep it up. Look: 2.5/3 - I really like the way this comes together. Strongest point is the cool text work, and nice composition overall. It is a bit too empty on the right side though. Stock work is cool, but maybe try blurring the stock work on the sides a bit to keep the focal in the centre. Creativity: 1/1 - Absolutely. Great stuff. Total: 5.5/6
  5. Effort: 2/2 - yes sir. Look: 2.5/3 - Main issue here is the text. Try to stick with simpler fonts for now and build the look on top of the text. It sticks out too much. Effects and colouring are nice, but lighting is a bit weak. Try to brighten up around his face a bit. Creativity: 1/1 - Nice bg work and effects. Total: 5.5/6
  6. Effort: 2/2 - Yep, enough work was done here. Look: 2.5/3 - Render looks really strange, low quality and odd contrast. Other than that it's quite nice. Effects and bg are nice though. Text looks fairly standard for you, try to shake it up a bit. Creativity: 1/1 -For sure. Total: 5.5/6
  7. happy cause won hockey league and championships mad because tendonitis makes it so I can't use a computer
  8. Effort: 2/2 - Great stock work. Look: 2.5/3 - Couple things holding this one back. First, the render needs to be made more apparent. Try playing with the High Pass filter (duplicate the render, High Pass, set on Soft Light) to make it more striking. The render could've also been a bit bigger. I like the text placement and style, but pure white should generally be avoided. Great stock work though. Creativity: 1/1 - Looks electric. Total: 5.5/6
  9. Effort: 2/2 - First in a long time, and you made two versions! Full marks for sure. Look: 2.25/3 - The improvement from V1 to V2 made a huge difference. Text is much better. The whole thing has great flow, but doesn't feel "together" enough. Play with adjustment layers and colouring/lighting to try to bring the whole thing together. If you have any questions feel free to ask. Creativity: 1/1 - For sure. Total: 5.25/6
  10. Effort: 2/2 - Enough was done. Look: 2.25/3 - Step down from your recent work. The text idea is neat but not really executed too well. The empty white at the top right is far too intense. The effects around the render are nice. Try to keep the text simple and let the stocks and fx do the work. Creativity: 1/1 - Definitely. Total: 5.25/6
  11. Effort: 2/2 - It's all there. Look: 2.75/3 - Could have used a bit more grit to blend the text in a bit, and the render could be a bit sharper, but other than that I love this. Creativity: 1/1 - Sweet concept. Total: 5.75/6
  12. Effort: 2/2 - Render effects, text work, etc. Look: 2.5/3 - Not really feeling this one too much. The text could be a bit larger, and a different font for the 'Wahl' text would have made it better, something a bit bolder. Render effects are nice, but the render probably could have been larger, to make up for the emptiness in the rest of the sig. Creativity: 1/1 - Keep up the good work! Total: 5.5/6
  13. Effort: 1.5/2 - You had a good streak going for a while...and back to this. One stock, some text and a gradient map is all it looks like to me. Look: 2.5/3 - Lighting is not great. I like the text. Colouring is bland. You're better than this. Creativity: 1/1 - Something awesome next week maybe? Total: 5/6
  14. Effort: 2/2 - Yep, text, effects, lighting and colouring. Look: 2.75/3 - I really like this, but the typeface is kind of odd. The weird 's' and the larger 'n' make is look out of place. Nice render effects and composition. Creativity: 1/1 - Wallpaper. Total: 5.75/6
  15. Effort: 2/2 - Absolutely. Look: 2.5/3 - Oh man, this was tough. The effects are stellar, but the text just isn't there. The typeface choice probably could've been better, and try to avoid that glow effect on the text. Creativity: 1/1 - Effects are heavenly. Total: 5.5/6
  16. My god, that was the worst officiating I've ever seen.
  17. Could use a bit more stock work. Text is cool but maybe a tad large. Also it feels a bit too grey.
  18. Good: Use of stocks is nice flow/composition is nice Bad: Shadow/border thing. It's too stark. Try using a large soft brush, and on low opacity and on Soft Light, brush around the edges Too bright - not much detail left in his face Text - I usually try to keep the text all caps or all lowercase. Also, try to avoid using that glow from Layer Styles. Look around the forum for ideas for text, if you're stuck. VHL logo is kinda cheesy Keep it up, the rust will be gone in no time!
  19. I also have a very active account.
  20. Yeah guys...don't have everyone go in and say "the site is awesome!". It looks pretty bad. Only comment if you have a fairly old and active reddit account.
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