InstantRockstar 1,247 Posted June 29, 2021 Share Posted June 29, 2021 v.2, JardyB10, gorlab and 2 others 2 1 1 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaikoku-hito 2,130 Posted June 29, 2021 Share Posted June 29, 2021 (edited) You are a horrible individual that knows nothing about hockey. You should be banned from playing in the VHL and on a great organization like the Seattle Bears. InstantRockstar should be more like Frozenchoke!! LOL!! Edit* Did you mean the critique the image? Edited June 29, 2021 by Gaikoku-hito a_Ferk, Ledge, diacope and 2 others 1 3 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-857625 Share on other sites More sharing options...
InstantRockstar 1,247 Posted June 29, 2021 Author Share Posted June 29, 2021 8 minutes ago, Gaikoku-hito said: You are a horrible individual that knows nothing about hockey. You should be banned from playing in the VHL and on great organization like the Chicago Phoenix. InstantRockstar should be more like Frozenchoke!! LOL!! all accurate tbh Gaikoku-hito 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-857627 Share on other sites More sharing options...
JardyB10 4,868 Posted June 29, 2021 Share Posted June 29, 2021 (edited) Your eyebrows are too thick, but your eyes are also too far apart. Your hair looks as though showers weren’t invented yet, and you drafted a complete scrub defenceman in the first round last off-season. The sig is pretty dope though. Edited June 29, 2021 by JardyB10 Ledge and Gaikoku-hito 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-857630 Share on other sites More sharing options...
v.2 1,411 Posted June 29, 2021 Share Posted June 29, 2021 You're def getting better, sick one! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-857635 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enorama 2,039 Posted June 29, 2021 Share Posted June 29, 2021 40 minutes ago, JardyB10 said: Your eyebrows are too thick, but your eyes are also too far apart. Your hair looks as though showers weren’t invented yet, and you drafted a complete scrub defenceman in the first round last off-season. The sig is pretty dope though. and he's got big ears JardyB10 and Gaikoku-hito 1 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-857644 Share on other sites More sharing options...
JardyB10 4,868 Posted June 29, 2021 Share Posted June 29, 2021 17 minutes ago, Enorama said: and he's got big ears Suitably a dopey looking motherfucker for how dope the sig is. Gaikoku-hito 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-857650 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Banackock 8,124 Posted June 29, 2021 Share Posted June 29, 2021 Helmet blurring also is he pooping? That’s a poop face diacope 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-857667 Share on other sites More sharing options...
N0HBDY 1,128 Posted June 29, 2021 Share Posted June 29, 2021 Some of y’all are ruthless wtf... Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-857745 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Trifecta 1,902 Posted June 30, 2021 Share Posted June 30, 2021 Solid work brother @InstantRockstar Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-857794 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Domino Archives 334 Posted September 6, 2021 Share Posted September 6, 2021 7/10. This is orange... what? Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-871257 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MattBake12 18 Posted September 11, 2021 Share Posted September 11, 2021 Looks nice to me- a lot of orange but I think its very well blended and not too too busy. My only recommendation would be to define the goalie helmet a bit more on the top left. Well done! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-871859 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted October 4, 2021 Share Posted October 4, 2021 The font is really bringing this down. It looks like soneone just added a layer on top of your graphic to make it about his player lol. During my livestream, I talked about how I try to build my layout as soon as possible, before any FX and lighting. Therefore, I put the render and then I immediately work on the text. It gave my results that made the text a bit more incorporated to the sig. In this case, fire being the general theme, you could have worked with something that disintegrate or with some fire sparks. Text is difficult but it is mainly what will bring your graphics to the next level InstantRockstar 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105191-critique-me/#findComment-877530 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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