Overview: 2/2 - Pettyfer first began his hockey career in Riga, so maybe you can join us on the glorious Riga Reign someday :3. Well written story, nice work.
Pros and cons: 3/3 - Met word requirement, had 3 solid pros and cons
Grammar: 1/2 - Molholt got it.
Presentation: 1/1 - Looks nice.
Overall: 7/8
Final: 7/8