Content: 5/5 - Cool overview of how Szatkowski got to where he is today. It sure seems to help having connections, whether it's a dad as a VHL GM or a family friend as a VHLM GM. I also like that you put in stats and analyzed them. It was really fun winning a cup with you in Ottawa, let's go win another one in Riga!
Grammar: 0.75/1 - There were lots of arbitrary places that I felt needed commas, but these were the ones I believe to be the main ones.
For starters he is the son = For starters, he is the son
high school play Szatkowski = high school play, Szatkowski
Using these connections Szatkowski = Using these connections, Szatkowski
mentioned in the interview the Ottawa Lynx went = mentioned in the interview, the Ottawa Lynx went
Heading into the playoffs Szatkowski = Heading into the playoffs ,Szatkowski
Appearance: 1/1 - Looked really good.
Over 500 Words: 1/1 - Yup.
Overall: 7.75/8