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Good article.

Lots of pretty colors.

Content: 3/3 - People always form into their own little groups of people they enjoy being with or agree with, whether it's online or real life. I think it's fine if people have their own "cliques/groups" of people they like talking with, as long as they still talk with everyone else and are friendly. As far as the whole "who you know thing" for awards, I'm not sure how true that is. I won rookie of the year when I wasn't really active and barely knew anyone. Grammar: 2/2 - Flyers got this. Appearance: 1/1 - Good. Overall: 6/6 Final: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - This was very well done for a first media spot. Don't worry about not knowing much about the league yet, it'll come in time. I think I spent my first 5 media spots just talking about myself and maybe a little bit on my VHLM team. I like that you are making a small guy that hits a lot, kind of similar to the Flyers Zac Rinaldo. Grammar: 2/2 - Perfect! Appearance: 1/1 - Looks good. Overall: 6/6 Final: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Having an elite goalie is something that every team wants in order to win a cup. With so few people making goalies, and their high position of importance, one way to make your player stand out is to create a goalie. If you keep up your activity, maybe you'll become the best first gen goalie ever! Grammar: 2/2 - The HartnellDown worshiper got everything. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks good. Overall: 6/6 Final: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Wow, that's really good winning with both a VHLM team and a VHL team in the same year. While it would no longer be possible to accomplish such a task now, I guess you can make up for it by winning back to back to back cups or something. Grammar: 2/2 - Nice job, couldn't find anything. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks good. Overall: 6/6 Final: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Interesting story about some interesting basements. I like how Satan showed up at the end. Also LOL Atlanta Thrashers. Grammar: 2/2 - Couldn't find anything else. Appearance: 1/1 - Good. Overall: 6/6 Final: 6/6

I was about to get graded.....

Content: 3/3 - It's cool to see that Leitner and Janssen wind up on the same team once again. I think this website is more fun when you play with people you like, so I'm glad it worked out. Also, the Super Cup is a really cool idea which gets the whole league involved and allows for new players to be picked as well. I just wish the draft didn't take so long. Grammar: 2/2 - Only a few. fanbase = fan base legitmate = legitimate Appearance: 1/1 - Maybe add some color next time. Overall: 6/6

Not if the Eagles get him first! Also, the Cowboys will have nearly no cap room next year.

Gow 3 Points

LOL COWBOYS TONY CHOKEMO JERRUH JONES

My respect for you just grew a lot.

Looks very purty. Thanks.

Hey VHL let's play some haxball together. I know some of you played it a while back, and I know a few people on here who like playing haxball. So.... let's play some haxball together. If you don't know what I'm talking about, haxball is something like team air hockey/soccer that's a real fun simple game. http://www.haxball.com/ I have a pretty good internet connection so I can host rooms. We should play some haxball doe.

Content: 3/3 - I like that you modeled your goalie after Brodeur, who is one of the few standup goalies left. I also like the background story where you talked about playing with the Mooseheads, which I think is the best hockey name ever. I wish you good luck in developing your goalie, and hopefully you have a career like Brodeur's. Grammar: 2/2 - Flyers got all of it. Presentation: 1/1 - Good. Pros: 1.5/2 - Same as what Flyers said, you described your pros well but did not reach near 200. Cons: 1.5/2 - Same as above. Overall: 9/10 Final: 9/10

Content: Mike always does the backwards things to win cups. He made the Riga trade many considered stupid, then won a cup. Now, little Mike made a goalie and won another cup. I like how you put in the family connection with little Mike getting the family experience from big Mike. Grammar: 1.5/2 - Flyersfan most of it. I found some more places commas could have been added to make the article run smoother, but I didn't take off as the commas weren't a necessity. conern. = concern. Presentation: 1/1 - Always solid. Pros: Under 200 words but you wrote well. Cons: Over 200 words. Overall: 9.5/10 Final: 10/10

Content: 5/5 - Well-done rookie profile on a player who dominated the VHLM last year. You made it clear making Robin a two way forward was a big priority (although he does have some good offensive abilities as well), which is important because defense needs to be played by all five positions in hockey. Also, if Sean Couturier is a very good floor to have, and if you continue to maximize your tpe output, maybe Robin Gow can become the Eric Lindros of the VHLM. Grammar: 1/1 - Perfect. Couldn't find anything. Appearance: 1/1 - Dropcaps. Over 500 Words?: 1/1 - Yes. Overall: 8/8

Congrats Quebec!

LOLSkins

Content: 3/3 - I like how crazy the playoffs have been the past few years, especially with the rivalry settings turned all the way up. It can lead to some major upsets and Toronto nearly pulled one off. Also wow at the 77 shots in that one game. Grammar: 2/2 - Flyers got everything. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks good. Overall: 6/6 Final: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Don't worry too much about your sophomore slump, I too just went through a bad season in my second year in the VHLM. As long as you keep getting tpe each week, Collier will start producing the points. The Express is a good young team, and as the players around you get better as well, so will your player. Grammar: 1.5/2 - Flyers got this. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks good. Overall: 6/6 Final: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Once again interesting to see where the VHL and NHL talent comes from. While most NHL talent comes from Canada, I'll be curious to see if the U.S. starts producing more prospects as hockey becomes more popular. Grammar: 2/2 - Flyers got it all. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks good. Overall: 6/6 Final: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - This was a very good breakdown of the playoff series between the Lynx and Wild. I like how you matched up each team's offense, defense, and goalie against each other to see which one was better. Your prediction was right, and the Lynx son the series. Grammar: 1.25/2 - Flyers got this. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks good. Overall: 5.25/6 Final: 5/6

Content: 3/3 - Interesting to see what the Canadian Junior league teams have produced for both the VHL and NHL. I'll be curious to see whether the American Junior teams produce more VHL talent than the Canadian Junior teams. I also think Mooseheads is a really awesome name for a hockey team. Grammar: 2/2 - Couldn't find anything, nice job. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks good. Overall: 6/6