Toast

Content: 3/3 - Nice to see you back at it with a new player, and it's also nice to see that you ended up on a team that you will enjoy. hopefully you guys compete instead of having to be traded. Really hoping that your run on this site works out better this time around. It's a new site so don't go claiming viruses anymore. Grammar: 2/2 - Really fantastic work. I was drawn in and didn't see anything (or zoned out). Appearance: 1/1 - The best piece I've looked at today. Woo! OVERALL: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Pretty much repeating what STZ just went through, but it's good to see that you're back and giving an effort to make Deaton that much better of a player. I know New York must be happy because when you're going through a rebuild, any active prospects are helpful. Best of luck with your VHLM goals and your future with New York! Grammar: 2/2 - Just me nit-picking. first round picks -> first-round picks Appearance: 1/1 - Apart from the missed paragraph break/colour code, all good! Overall: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Like STZ said, it seemed a lot like a Rookie Profile, but you gave the format of the piece a different angle, running through the goals. I thought that was a really sweet idea. Best of luck heading into your rookie season and the seasons that follow. Hopefully you get your name in the HoF! If you work hard at it, it's very possible. Grammar: 2/2 - STZ pointed out the typo, but I would like to see some proper press style when it comes to numbers. So for example: 2 of his top -> two of his top 7 more seasons -> seven more seasons 1st, 2nd, etc -> first, second... 1 to 10 is always spelled out as the word, but anything above 10 is left as the number. No worries about it this piece, but please fix this for anything upcoming. Appearance: 1/1 - Bright ass picture but it works! OVERALL: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Good look in on the season ahead for Vasteras and their future with the youth starting to make statements with the team. Hopefully Bagelface will have a better season in net and if that's the case then Vasteras stands a chance of having a pretty good season for sure. Best of luck guys. Grammar: 2/2 - You're a stubborn one, I know I've corrected this pick thing multiple times. Also name errors suck, but I won't dock. first round pick -> first-round pick Corcorran -> Corcoran (x3) Appearance: 1/1 - Good work. Weird that the picture isn't centered but whatever. It's a new site and I barely understand formatting posts. OVERALL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - What an awful time to be hit with temporary amnesia! Haha, I really enjoyed this piece. You had an awesome idea for this article and it was a very enjoyable read overall. You could even make this a recurring thing throughout the season, just to make sure Doomsday has a headache. Grammar: 1/1 - No spelling mistakes that I found. Just one period error that is almost nothing. “DuJuan has looked pretty good out there,” the Storm general manager said, -> “DuJuan has looked pretty good out there,” the Storm general manager said. Appearance: 1/1 - Beauty of a story! OVERALL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - I really enjoyed reading this preview for the North American conference. Make sure to fact check the story before posting it up though. Just because you edited the article doesn't mean I think the first reply is a lie, haha. No worries though, it was still a good piece. Good work! Grammar: 2/2 - Caught some minor issues in the piece. recently acquired center -> recently-acquired center offseason -> off-season 3rd overall pick -> third-overall pick Appearance: .5/1 - Just bolding headers ain't going to cut it. This piece could have used colours, pictures, really anything else. OVERALL: 5.5/6

Brampton claims Sami Kravinen.

You're welcome Toronto.

gregpls

BELIEVE IN THE SHIELD.

Brampton claims Damon Tyrael.

Claim

Third place in league two! I understand the baseball!

JUST ADD ME DAMMIT.

I don't know how many you need, but you definitely need Toast in this.

Player Information Username: Toast Full Name: Steven Smyl Position: Goalie Age: 23 Handedness: Left Recruited By: N/A Player Attributes Total Points Earned: 0 SK = Skating: 70 SZ = Size: 70 AG = Agility: 70 RB = Rebound Control: 70 SC = Style Control: 70 HS = Hand Speed: 70 RT = Reaction Time: 70 EX = Experience: 35 LD = Leadership: 69 Other Jersey Number: 30 Height (inches): 6'2" Weight (lbs.): 175 lbs. Birthplace: Toronto, Ontario, Canada Player Finances Awards: Career Stats: Player Movement Past Players (S36) D - Damon Wolfe

Fixed!

I was between 2000-2500. Not sure on the exact number. Just set me at 2K and that's good enough.

She* is. Shut up Meow.