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Content: 3/3 - I'm afraid I have to give you 0 for this article because you self-plug like a damn loser. Such a loser. Seriously though, fantastic piece with some solid ideas for some new names. Looking forward to the other trophies you have planned for next week. Grammar: 2/2 - Didn't spot a thing. Apperance: 1/1 - Beauty! Overall: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - A nice one-two punch here from Cologne. Fantastic point totals from the two of these guys this season and if things keep up the duo will definitely be a force other teams have to watch out for. Keep up the good work guys! Grammar: 2/2 - Fantastic work overall. Just watch up for numbers above 10. Gotta be written out in number form. Appearance: 1/1 - Yep. Overall: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6

Content: 1.5/3 - Yeah, definitely a tough read. It just doesn't flow at all with all of the spelling a grammar errors. I know the minimum is 450 but you didn't even hit that minus your title. You should also always attempt to at least get to 500 words. I recommend reading some other pieces/the rubric before assuming. Grammar: 0/2 Appearance: 1/1 - Good enough. Overall: 2.5/6 FINAL: 3/6

Content: 3/3 - Cracked up at that last line so badly Loved this piece throughout. Good way to poke fun at the situation. Congrats on the high scoring totals for your team. Hopefully Landry picks it up now that his 'amnesia' has suddenly vanished. Grammar: 2/2 - Struggled to find anything. man's been -> man has been general manager, Victor Alfredsson -> no comma Appearance: 1/1 - Good format and pics! Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Good look at some of the biggest players on the Ottawa roster. You guys have been having a great season so far, and who is to question it with a team like that. Good piece. Grammar: 2/2 - Just a few things VHLMs North American conference -> VHLM's North American conference numbers 10 and over need to be written out in number form teams’ -> team's Appearance: 1/1 - That small writing hurt my eyes tbh. Good thing you had the team pictures splitting it up, Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - I commend you on sticking with Cologne despite what seems to be blow after blow to the team. You definitely have put a lot of effort into the team and your own player for that matter. IF you actually get close to what you're on pace for I'll be amazed. 1300 seems almost unheard of to me. Keep up the good work! Grammar: 2/2 - I saw nothing. Absolutely fantastic! Appearance: 1/1 - Also very good! Overall: 6/6 - Fine job!

Content: 3/3 - Well that ending was certainly a swerve. After all that nice talk about how Glass has been a mainstay in the Cologne franchise it's just sad to read his auto-retirement is nearing. Glad to hear you enjoyed your time with the team though. I'm sure they appreciated you being around! Grammar: 2/2 - A couple things preseason -> pre-season Its -> it's around”, -> around," Any number 10 and up is written as number form Appearance: 1/1 - Kind of boring tbh. Format changes randomly in middle of article. I'll give this to you though. I recommend colour for quotes next time or something. Or another picture. Overall: 6/6

I will be HHH and bury the Express

POKEMANS

Calgary got Smyled. It's the new 'Labatted'... right?

Just what. And yeah, not even sure if we've ever spoken via email, but it somehow got there.

YOU THINK YOU CAN JUST SEND ME SPAM VIRUS EMAILS? YOU WILL PAY.

First career shutout!

I approve. Despite the lack of post-game this is my favourite handheld Pokémon game. Not sure about Mario Kart 7 though. Looks really sweet but I haven't played it. Also get Fire Emblem Awakening.

Kick in those faces!

Smyl > LeBeau. Where's my trophy?

Somebody other than me must have bought one or both of these epic games. Discuss your favourite moments so far. Mine would be finding the shiny Swalot I caught yesterday! Woo! Also if anyone has a 3DS Friend Code, post it here. I'll add it later tonight.

That was ugly.

Content 3/3 - YEAH! Another fantastic article! Congrats on being the fifth-overall pick, shame that you weren't taken at first like you should've been according to the YEAH! rankings. Looking forward to seeing how things go for you this season. Grammar: 2/2 - Just watch for words that should be hyphened. fifth overall selection, first overall pick, etc -> fitfh-overall selection, first-overall pick Appearance: 1/1 - YEAH! OVERALL: 6/6 YEAH!

Content: 3/3 - Congrats on the award last season. You've consistently put up good numbers so it's well deserved! Looking forward to beating you for the award in the future. Haha. Awesome article, but that is expected by you at this point. You consistently put up good work and that's why you're one of the top players. Grammar: 2/2 - Didn't spot anything. Good work! Appearance: 1/1 - Have your easy point. OVERALL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Nothing to complain about here. Good work breaking down the first six games of the season and how exactly they went for your player. Hopefully he rebounds soon enough and gets a goal, but even if not, his production is going fine right now. I'm sure it'll pick up with time! Grammar: 2/2 -As I mentioned in your other article, watch out for the numbers things, other than that it was fine! Appearance: 1/1 - Random double spacing at beginning is weird, but whatever. Weird site is weird. OVERALL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Oh Eldred, you certainly were an odd one. I was involved with some of the arguments involving him, like the VHLM Commish case. He certainly expected a lot that quite frankly I didn't think he deserved, and at the time it seemed like you were defending him. This article clears that up though. Fantastic read running through his return, I really enjoyed this! Grammar: 2/2 - I got nothing, beautiful piece! Appearance: 1/1 - Coloured quotes to break things up ftw. OVERALL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Good article here. Really interested in seeing how the season goes for Davos and just how things will be for Fong as the coach on the bench. Never heard of this for a sim league, but eh, if it's working for the team, who am I to complain? go easier on us next time please. Grammar: 2/2 - Dat beginning. Other than that, solid. On the sunday , -> On Sunday, 2nd -> second Appearance: 1/1 - Looks good! OVERALL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Good idea for this article by running through the North American teams, assessing who would be a good fit for your player. Nice little bits on every team and one didn't seem lacking compared to the other, which was good. Keep up the good work and you'll be a great player in the VHLM! Grammar: 2/2 - I laughed when you said you weren't too good at English because it was better than some articles I've seen. Some awkward sentences but it was perfect! Appearance: 1/1 - Yes, good work! OVERALL: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Fuckin Bagel, I always knew the guy was scum from the first day that I saw him. Or it was the Chinese... or it was the guy that never joined the site in the first place. That's how awful Bill was. Good work shining some humour on a situation that has been upsetting/angering for most. Grammar: 2/2 - I didn't catch anything apart from numbers. 1-10 is spelled out, 10+ isn't. Appearance: 1/1 - I'm hungry now. OVERALL: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6