Will

#SpeakTheTruth

i forgive you

Context: 3/3 Definitely sounded better than last week as far as seriousness goes. As usual, you guys talked about a lot of interesting stuff here. I especially liked the member of the week segment. I think it's great that there are loads of podcasts getting posted, and I hope it keeps up. Me and Higgy are going to try to get ours into a regular thing. Professionalism: 2/2 Definitely a big improvement here over last week. Other than Jericho's outro, but I think I can live with that. Editing: 1/1 Sounded pretty good. There were a couple awkward points but good for the most part. Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 Although his stats aren't anything fantastic, I think Mike's stats will only increase as Mike improves as a player. He's definitely on the right track so far, and I really hope to see Mike tearing up the VHLM by the end of the season. Grammar: 1/2 I definitely see you're writing improving. You're still having some trouble with commas and sentance structure, but I can definitely see an improvement as far as spelling and wording goes. I didn't mark every single thing down here, but based on the word count, I've gotta deduct one. only on = only in His plus / minus is -10 and and the worst worth on Ottawas VHLM team =His +/- is -10, which is the worst on the Ottawa Lynx. (9,68 %). Ab = (9.68%), a in my stats my shots = in my stats, my shots But momentary i have a stone =But for the moment, I have a stone (?) transit = transition are playing are = are playing a could at the moment = could be at the moment mindet = mindset until the season ends. Would be a great fit. = until the season ends, that would be a great fit. Appearance: 1/1 Looks good. Overall: 5/6

Gotta get dem leaderboard stats

Fuckin salo eh

Thats a first

Dont worry victator, mad men podcast would love to properly capture your voice someday

Fucking katniss

Content: 3/3 866 words. This was a really interesting read. The only one of the guys you mentioned Ive had the pleasure of meeting was the multi-millionare, and I must say that I'm glad he gave up after being on here for a couple weeks. Grammar: 2/2 Didn't find anything, nice! Appearance: 1/1 Looks good. Overall: 6/6

Lmao, im glad to see the mutant thing was taken light heartedly, Seth enjoyed it too

Content: 2.75/3 This was a fairly good read. This is another interesting series you have going. Like I have told you before, I really like reading about the history of the VHL and most of your articles are very well thought out. I did find this one slightly hard to read, however. Mainly the "Seasons 1-9" section. I just found that the way it was written made it difficult to read. The rest of the article was better, though. Grammar: 1/2 Looks like a lot of small stuff piled up here. I'm usually extremely lenient when it comes to commas, but this was a bit excessive. I know there is lots of members on here willing to proofread peoples media spots and maybe that is something you should look into. one seasons = one season the record for those = the record, for those 9 players or 36% = 9 players, or 36%, (x3, at the start of each body paragraph) made it in the top 25 all-time in assists = made it to the top 25 all-time assists list Scotty Campbell who = Scotty Campbell, who Season 8 which again = Season 8 which, again, The next Season 5 alum appears on this list, this players name is Alex McNeil. = Yet another Season 5 alum appears next on the list, and that is Alex McNeil. (Something like that would work better, the wording of this sentence just doesn't work) 97 assists which = 97 assists, which recrod holder = record holder godo = good David Walcott like his predecessors before him all come from the "Knight" agency. = [Just doesn't make sense] Appearance: 1/1 Looks good. Overall: 4.75/6

With Oslo moving players out and Bern taking players in, it's only a matter of time before Bern overtakes us.

Content: 3/3 Nice read. Looks like the Americans, and most of their roster, is off to a really good start. There was a lot of questions about that FA pick in Tukio, but I personally think it was a good move to strengthen the Americans. Good luck with the rest of the season. Grammar: 2/2 Just a few small things: are top team in = are the top team in so far = so far, Appearance: 1/1 Looks good. Overall: 6/6

joined yaaaaaaaaaay

nice one slobo

titties

Oh gawd not this guy

Lmao, Krickett saves the day.

Content: 3/3 544 words. This was a really nice overview of some of the stars on the Americans roster this season. It sounds like most of the roster is doing pretty well so far. I'm just glad you didn't do a section on that bastard Tukio Grammar: 2/2 Just two stupid things: sophomore season = sophomore season, Xaio, like Tordahl = Xaio, like Tordahl, Appearance: 1/1 Looking good. Overall: 6/6

Wow, Krickett is really carrying us lol

Vlasis was -1 so its a win in my books

me and munk tho

me and munk tho