are you kezkincaid???
I think your graphic is pretty cool tbh and one of the better 8 that I just graded. The logo change actually looks pretty decent. You have a grasp on using the TRANSFORM tool in PS< specifically the perspective/skew shift. I do however think the editing of the render got a bit out of hand. Whenever a jersey/fabric on the render turns to literally pure white, and you lose any sense of detail/texture (which is occurring for large parts of the jersey here) you've gone too far. A hockey player should never look like a pure void of whiteness/blackness in a graphic. Also his skin looks like he's in a nuclear radiation chamber or something.
I think the text actually isn't bad in terms of font/color selection, but I do think it's really undersized and looks cramped in between the player and border, and hard to read. Never be afraid to overlay text ontop of other elements in a sig/graphic. Like in this case, the player's shoulder. (I know the white/color of the jersey can clash with your existing text, but you can combat this with text/layer effects like stroke or drop shadow, etc.)
you have some skills, keep pursuing graphic design and looking up tutorials on youtube!
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