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5-1 Americans

Dynamo Americans Reign Express

Content: 3/3 - Moscow is pretty good and your a big reason why. If you get sent back to the VHLM after being drafted you'll pretty much be the best player in the league/best dman for sure. So yeah, keep working Grammar: 2/2 - Some lil things. longetivity = longevity over night = overnight Appearance: 1/1 - Looks lovely. Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Lovely piece as per usual. Your look back at drafts are always a good read. Grammar: 2/2 - Much wow as per usual except one that i'm not %100 sure. and an go-to to slot = and a go-to slot (Is the double "to" intentional, not sure. I'm sort of assuming it's not if it is ignore me) Appearance: 1/1 - Very cute. Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Fighting sucks in both real life and the sim. You should get your media spots to 500 words imo. Strive for more rather than close to the minimum!! Grammar: 2/2 - Some lil mistakes. why is pretty boy like = why is a pretty boy like you get a open = you get an open don't even a wear visor = don't even wear a visor Appearance: 1/1 - I always like your pictures. Overall: 6/6

Overview: 1.75/2 - Wasn't 500 words. Like DAAD mentioned. Pros & Cons: 2.5/3 - Like DAAD good pro's and cons, just didn't hit the word count. Grammar: 1/2 - There was a lot. Don't think its necessary to point out any more like other grade suggested. I would take DAAD's suggestion of getting someone to proof read it (Even PM me considering i'm your GM for the time being) (or proof read it on MSWord or on a online thing). There was just too much. Presentation: 1/1 - The graphic at the top is pretty neat. I like it! Overall: 6/8 (6.25 Rounds to 6)

3-1 Titans

Reign Express Wranglers HC Dynamo

Fauxview The Riga Reign and Helsinki Titans are fighting for the top spot in the European Conference, which also makes it Faux vs Faux. Both these teams consist a Faux with Riga having the older Bronson Faux and Helsinki having the young Marcel Faux. The Faux’s have had success in the VHLM ranks early in their careers and now both are looking for VHL success. Marcel and Helsinki sit on top of the European Conference with a 25-8-1 record for 51 points and Bronson and Riga have a 21-11-2 record for 44 points. The European Conference is very strong this year so these two teams along with the others could be fighting for a playoff spot all season long in the European Conference. Let’s take a look at both Faux’s seasons so far, most importantly Bronson Faux. Bronson with Riga The Riga Reign loaded up on talent in the off-season with a new General Manager at the helm which has effected Bronson’s point totals a little bit this season. With more talent around him he’s not the main threat offensively like he was in the couple seasons prior when Riga was rebuilding. Bronson currently sits at 8 goals and 16 assists for 24 points in 34 games. That is pretty decent but not amazing. Bronson is now playing second line with Griffin Simons and Kurtis Hunter which is also probably a factor in his point totals. As usual Bronson has ton of hits with 175 which is most of the Riga Reign and second in the entire league which is fairly impressive. Bronson is providing the Reign with a top notch physical player. If Riga make the play-offs Bronson could be a game breaker with his amazing physical presence. This physical presence has also left him in the penalty box for 79 minutes which is the sixth most in the entire VHL but that is expected with such a physical player like Bronson. If Bronson begins to find his offensive touch again, he could very well win the Best Two-Way Forward award at the end of the season. If Bronson starts producing offensively the Reign could be a massive threat to win the European Conference and the Continental Cup. Marcel With Helsinki Now Marcel is still chugging along with the Helsinki Titans. The younger Faux now has more points than Bronson with 16 goals and 13 assists for 29 points. Marcel is still on the second line with Rookie of the year candidate Aleksi Koponen and veteran Brady Stropko who is a new addition to the line. With all the talent the Titans have upfront Marcel is a bit of an afterthought. Although he recently got his first career hat-trick which is fairly impressive for a rookie on the second line on a good team, so there’s that. One area Marcel needs to improve on is his playmaking ability. Right now he is kind of a one trick pony with his scoring prowess and the amount of shots he takes. One game he recorded 18 shots on goal with no goals! Which is ridiculous when you think about it but that’s how things go. Once Marcel gets higher on the depth chart and fixes his flaws he could be a top player for the Titans in a few seasons. In a few weeks we will take another look at how the Faux’s are doing. Until next time, read safe!

If it says [Final ____) then you can claim it . Once someone grades it (Unless it says Needs Second Grade) than you may claim it!

stay gold ponyboy stay gold you did a good job <3

Content: 3/3 - I didn't realize E'twaun was doing so well, then again I don't pay attention really. It looks like a pretty good top two with both teams getting really good players, both win . Looking forward to the next one, and whenever you do S44 and tell me how great I am Grammar: 2/2 - Nothing as per usual. Appearance: /1 - Looks cute. Overall: 6/6

Saskatoon Also Free Claims Gregory Fallum because why not

Overview: 2/2 - Weclome to the League. Hope you enjoy it and stick around. You look like you could be a good member. Good luck with your player, I hope to see you around Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Yup, Although the Cons section was lacking a bit, it still made it way over the word count. Good job ! Grammar: 2/2 - I did not catch anything. Presentation: 1/1 - Very nice. Overall: 8/8

Saskatoon Free Claims Supernaw because why not.

Content: 3/3 - Nice media spot from your players perspective. I wouldn't want to actually do a interview in real life, I couldn't do it. A couple funny things that made me smile for some reason. Grammar: 2/2 - Good job ! is not a easy thing = is not an easy thing Appearance: 1/1 - I like your family guy picture and the photo-shopped picture is always good for a smile. Overall: 6/6

if u make another league let me know

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Content: 3/3 - Interesting read. The S28 draft was pretty damn good and I was apart of it with Hodgson although nowhere near the top 5 . The teams in the top five of S27 must've been pretty happy with what they had/got. Grammar: 2/2 - Nothing Appearance: 1/1 - Pretty. Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Wow, thats a lot of players. I didn't realize you had that much history in VHL, guess that's how much I know. A nice piece on the players you've made and how successful or not successful they were. Bitch Higgins is great though. You also had a few interesting name choices, haha including Bitch. Grammar: 2/2 - Far and way, Stormwall = Far and away, Stromwall (I think you meant away otherwise ignore me) Appearance: 1/1 - Yes Overall: 6/6

Content: /3 - Nice little interview. I tried to claim you on waivers but it didn't work. Good luck with Moscow and the eventual VHL draft and VHLM draft next season! Grammar: 2/2 - Lovely. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks okay. Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Welcome back again (I think? haha). Yeah, sim leagues definitely have an addictive power. Although I wouldn't go as far as saying Victor is a reason to stay and come back Grammar: 2/2 - Didn't catch anything. Appearance: 1/1 - Lovely Overall: 6/6

Overview: 5/5 - Good biography. Your player is pretty good, i was somehow hoping you were going to magically fall to like 16th in the draft, but obviously it didn't happen . Good luck with your player, keep tearing it up . Grammar: 3/3 - I didn't catch anything surprisingly. Great job . Presentation: /1 - Nice. Over 1000 Words? 1/1 Overall: 10/10

lol Zadorov sucked