VHLE Rome/Berlin Team Concept 2 Electric Boogaloo

[Zetterberg 863]

BERLIN

ROME

UPDATE:

Edited June 6, 2021 by Zetterberg

[rory 1,877]

berlins bad cause the cathedral isn't under construction 3/10 realism

[jhatty8 663]

I like Rome a lot. Could you send them without the text?

[Zetterberg 863]

2 minutes ago, jhatty8 said:

I like Rome a lot. Could you send them without the text?

It's a floating head and a tail I've have to do a bunch more work to make it look good, I could try just not rn

[Banackock 7,984]

Different. Cool work for sure! 

[bigAL 2,176]

Fox? Foxes? Feex? English is the worst, and ai can’t believe I had to Google what the plural of a fox is. Fox sounds as wrong as Elks, but both are acceptable. Box, boxes, fox, fox, mouse, mice, house, houses, goose, geese, moose, meese. I think I like The Foxes over The Fox. The Fox sounds like a classic rock radio station in the next town over. 

[JigglyGumballs 1,056]

That's it, I'm recreating as an Italian when my player retires

[diacope 1,696]

The town looks a little fresher, fox looks sick! Just not sure about the text..

[der meister 3,132]

4 hours ago, 16z said:

The town looks a little fresher, fox looks sick! Just not sure about the text..

 

This is where I'm at too. If it's in Italy, it should be Volpe instead of fox, too. 

[Thunfish 72]

I think it looks amazing, to be quite honest with you. The drawing has a quality edge that I think makes the logo stronger by default and it could definitively work as is. My only real complaint is the name per se. Singular nouns can work if they represent a feeling or an abstract concept, like the Trance, the Rave or the Euphoria. In this case, I'd recommend changing the name to plural (Foxes) or using the local word for Fox instead (Berlin Fuchs/der Fuchs von Berlin; Volpe di Roma).

 

I'd grade it an 8 out of 10 as is. Changing the name would make this a certified banger.

Edited June 6, 2021 by Thunfish

[der meister 3,132]

1 hour ago, Thunfish said:

I think it looks amazing, to be quite honest with you. The drawing has a quality edge that I think makes the logo stronger by default and it could definitively work as is. My only real complaint is the name per se. Singular nouns can work if they represent a feeling or an abstract concept, like the Trance, the Rave or the Euphoria. In this case, I'd recommend changing the name to plural (Foxes) or using the local word for Fox instead (Berlin Fuchs/der Fuchs von Berlin; Volpe di Roma).

 

I'd grade it an 8 out of 10 as is. Changing the name would make this a certified banger.

 

Please don't name a team the Berlin Fuchs. This league cannot handle the necessary level of maturity.

[Zetterberg 863]

Edited June 6, 2021 by Zetterberg

[Beketov 8,943]

TBH I find "fox" sounds better than "Foxes" I don't know why. Berlin Fox just sounds cool but Berlin foxes sounds cuddly and adorable.

[Thunfish 72]

46 minutes ago, Zetterberg said:

There we go, perfect stuff!

[Zetterberg 863]

8 minutes ago, Beketov said:

TBH I find "fox" sounds better than "Foxes" I don't know why. Berlin Fox just sounds cool but Berlin foxes sounds cuddly and adorable.

I agree but it seems like the general consensus is Foxes>Fox could go back if I'm wrong though

[Ricer13 2,776]

Fox > Foxes

[Beketov 8,943]

6 minutes ago, Zetterberg said:

I agree but it seems like the general consensus is Foxes>Fox could go back if I'm wrong though

General consensus, ugh, what do they know. Trust in my opinion my nameless ghoul, have I yet led you astray?

[JB123 728]

Logo looks great, not sure if “Foxes” or “Fox” (haha) is set in stone, but what about the Rome Gladiators? 

[Zetterberg 863]

1 hour ago, JB123 said:

Logo looks great, not sure if “Foxes” or “Fox” (haha) is set in stone, but what about the Rome Gladiators? 

Nothing is set in stone yet this was just a pitch