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Claimed:Fire Oslo GM, or Have the Watchmen Beat Them [Final 6/6]


Baozi

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Content: 3/3
Everyone is entitlted to their own opinions! Around 650 words of text walls. We'll see at the end of the season how Oslo ends up doing. If the defense ends up working for them, I guess that settles that...
 
Grammar: 1/2
Phil pointed out stuff..
season holder tickets -> season ticket holders
Hyphens: mind-numbingly bad, defense-first games, two-way player
previously, -> previously.
Comma issues, and confusing wording in most cases. Since I was mostly lost, I'm docking a point.
 
Appearance: 1/1
 
Could you have found a bigger image!? Colours and stuff.
 
Overall: 5/6
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Content: 3/3 - Yawn. Those low shot games ;) If Saskatoon wins its okay though. 

Grammar: 2/2 - Well two people have already pointed all of it out that I would've caught... Um.. I don't know if it was THAT terrible to dock off marks.. So i'll give it to you...

 

Appearance: 1/1 - Ok

 

Overall: 6/6 [ Final 5.5/6 -> 6/6] 
 

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