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Pandar

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  1. Good lighting, good text, great work all around.
  2. I really like the majority of this sig, effects are great. Something about the renders face is bugging me. The text seems a little too big, other than that, this is awesome.
  3. This is gorgeous. The simplicity is perfect. Maybe, the render could be a little bigger or farther to the left, but I'd have to see both, to really have an informed stance on that.
  4. My only thing is the font. I expect it to have said "space invaders", but the rest of the sig doesn't have that same 80's or digital feel. Love the rest, tho.
  5. I like the bg and texture work, renders okay. Not a huge fan of the text, tbh, doesnt really fit with the heavy geometric nature of the bg
  6. Main thing I dislike is that the text is brighter than the render. It really makes the text the focus of the piece. Some subtle texture work on the left side could help keep it from feeling so empty.
  7. I think inclusion of another color or two could really spice it up. The couple of white spots (that aren't lighting based) seem kind of out of place. Boubabi pretty much got everything else.
  8. Good depth on the piece, bg is stellar. Text is fine, but nothing special. Good render work, for what it is.
  9. The face seems a little over-done somehow... it almost feels like there are these really distinct regions lighting-wise, and it feels a little jarring to me. Might just be my screen, though. I really like the rest of the sig, good effects work. My only other think is that I completely agree with boubabi that the text doesn't really fit as well as it could with a different font.
  10. Duuuuuuuude. Conceptually this is so cool. I wish you'd done a little more with the top left of the sig, it feels a little empty. But again, that concept is dope. Wish I'd thought of it
  11. Well god damn. Lighting on the render is wonderful. Text is solid, mask work is dope. The BG works, but it's admittedly not my favorite from you. Can't put my finger on what's bothering me about it, but it's just not doing it for me, and with as strong as the foreground is, it's just standing out to me.
  12. I feel like there's an alien invasion going on the greens a little though to work with, because it would probably clash with his skin, but what you've got going on just feels really jarring atm. Light source feels a smidge too strong. I like the ideas going on, I'm just having a hard time getting past the green.
  13. Pretty much what beketov said. The colors don't really flow together for me, and so I feel like it's a little "slapped together". If you had stronger lighting, and pulled more of the blue/purple into the BG, I think it would be stronger as a whole.
  14. There's always been something pleasing to me about your soft focus style. I like the text, but he sub-text feels a little hard to read. The work on the mask is my favorite part, tbh.
  15. Render work is solid, good blending throughout. The dispersion effect is really interesting. I like the lighting a lot. The text is a bit simple, but with the clean simplicity of the piece, it fits well.
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