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Pandar

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  1. On the whole, I don't mind the text. My biggest thing is the the whole sig has a grunge feel, except for a couple of places in the BG where the white has been blurred and not gotten treated with grunge textures, so it feels almost ethereal (e.g. The laces next to the renders head.) Other than that, it's very cohesive and aesthetically pleasing.
  2. I mean, if you consider that you'd "normally" have to pay $10 for a doubles week, then it is free...
  3. Jeebus. How did we only allow 5 shots?! And I got a goal! Yay!
  4. 21 minutes of ice-time. Only stat? 2/5 from the dot. Ugh.
  5. One day Leblanc will learn how to shoot the damn puck
  6. Just VHL sigs, just hockey sigs, or whatever we've got?
  7. MAL's not doing much, but at least Saskatoon's winning!
  8. And nevermind. One shot in ~20 minutes? smh.
  9. Hey, Leblanc finally remembered how to do things...
  10. Pretty much what beketov said. I'd also add that I'd like some more subtle stuff on the right hand side to keep it from looking so empty. But that's hyper nitpicky.
  11. The lighting is a little too strong, the text is interesting in idea, but I think it comes up short in execution. This could benefit a lot from some blending and adjustment layers work. Could also use some more TLC on the render. Good ideas, though!
  12. The lighting is dope, the render is solid, the text is good. I'm losing the terminal "n". Also, I'm loving the effects behind the font. Great job, as usual!
  13. Lighting is interesting, I dig the text. Render's face feels a little flat, which bums me out because the rest of the sig has good depth. Great job!
  14. Gottdamn. The coloring is boss, the lighting is solid, the only thing I think I could critique is that I'm not crazy about the font, but it definitely works with the piece.
  15. Some of the light flares are a little too strong, and some stonger lighting/curves layer could help bring the focus to the render. It also feels like there hasn't been a ton of work on the render, but you might have just been really subtle about it. I like the idea of the light coming off of his back. I like the font for the text, but whatever's going on with the inside makes it a little hard to read because of how it interacts with what's behind it (particularly in the "eb" area). Nice piece though!
  16. There are some really good ideas here. The light flares are a little too strong, particularly the one over the panthers logo. The render feels a little LQ. If you're going to blur the bottom portion of the render, it makes sense to blur the BG as well. The compositions pretty good, and the text is alright, though you could add some additional effects to spice it up a bit. Oh, and thanks for the sig
  17. The render's really strong, but I feel like the text is way to basic, and lacks pop. The white circles on the left hand side seem a little out of place... maybe if there were more spread throughout the rest of the sig? Lighting could be a little stronger, maybe? Good work overall!
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