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58 minutes ago, Subject056 said:
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Nice graphic for Moscow! I like the grittiness of the BG and the contrast of the yellow on the darker BG. The logo and text placement are laid out well and the layout of the logo with the city in the BG looks good. The glow around the logo and text helps make them stand out on the BG. The font of the text works for this image and the sizing is done right. I feel like the noise in the glow of the text is a bit too much for myself but that is just my taste and probably differs for others. Really like what you've done with this. Nice work - 9/10
Ty
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On 5/13/2023 at 9:35 AM, jhatty8 said:
Review: As a whole, I like where you're going with this sig. You're trying a lot of cool ideas and I feel like you're really gearing up towards a banger. That said, there are a few tweaks here and there that I think would improve the sig. The biggest critique I'd give has to do with the text - I think the drop shadow is too jarringly dark and, especially on the left side when it interacts with the light, its a bit funky. I would lower the opacity on it by a lot. The rotations on the two texts are a bit off, the SDM part is slanted more downwards than the player text and they should be on the same level. I would also move the text (or scale it) away from the right border as it comes a bit too close to touching the edge. The font I'm not crazy about but I think it works decently enough. Lastly, the overall contrast is a touch too high and the darker parts should be a touch less dark imo. If you're on Ps/Photopea, make an exposure adjustment layer and nudge the offset slider a bit so that the overall darkness is slightly less. For the stuff I do like, I think that you did a great job of combining your elements. The lighting effects and background really comes together well and it creates a complete piece. The render also has pretty solid quality despite the size and is lit well.
7.5/10, don't let the huge body of critiques make you think that this isn't still a really solid sig , good job
Ty Hatty
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Used your graphic on the VHL Twitter, Check it out!
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Used your graphic on the VHL Twitter, Check it out!
https://twitter.com/VHL_Sim/status/1653996269197746176?s=20
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I personally like the Logo with the anchor much more. I personally don't think its "too similar" to the LVA or MIA logos at all.
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Username: Moon
Player Name: Walter Fitzroy Jr
Recruited From: Other (VHLFORUMCOM from Apex Legends)
Age: 50
Position: D
Height: 80 in.
Weight: 250 lbs.
Birthplace: Australia
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