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Pandar

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  1. I really like this. The style's really interesting, and not your normal fare. This is really eye-catching. Nice work!
  2. This is really good. My only complaint is that first over his arm... I would've blurred him more so he doesn't look quite so creepy.
  3. Ooooh I really dig that text. The render work is pretty good. Could use some stronger lighting to focus the eye to the render more immediately , but that's super minor and nitpicky
  4. Great lighting, text is good, nice effects. One or two of the lighting spots might be a little too strong, but that's pretty minor.
  5. This is dope!!! Love the palette, the text is solid, as is the effects work. Great job!!!
  6. I like the ideas going on here, but it falls short in execution. The renders could use some TLC and the lighting effects are to strong. The BG is super interesting, though. I think you could definitely turn out some quality stuff with time and practice!
  7. The BG is interesting as are the dimensions. My two biggest things are that I feel like the render is too far to the side and it looks like you might've used an inside shadows on the font, and I'm not digging it tbh. Other than those two things, this is pretty cool!
  8. You've clearly got the basics down. Not a fan of the"ghost render" as a rule. I feel like there's something that's not quite clicking, But I can't put my finger on what it is. I think it might be that the color palette you're using for the BG isn't quite gelling with the render... It's not clashing, it just isn't as harmonious as it could be. Keep practicing, you're doing great!!!
  9. 22 SHOTS?
  10. bumping in case someone wants one...
  11. HC Dynamo Titans Americans Vikings
  12. My first reaction was "oooooooooooooo" Great effects work, the simple text is perfect, IMO. Great piece.
  13. The text is pretty good. The render feels a little grainy. The blurring works pretty well. Some more lighting work could make this stronger, but it's a good showing.
  14. The BG is pretty good. I'm fine with the render. The last name probably doesn't need the black stroke. All in all, it's pretty alright. My favorite part is the color palette.
  15. The render work is lovely, and I really like a lot of what's going on here. However, I really, really dislike the text on the side. Not a big fan of the primary text either. Without those, this would be super tasty.
  16. This is clean. Love pretty much everything about this. Great piece.
  17. You've got the basic idea, you just need to start adding in some stock and effects work to make stuff "pop". My biggest complaint about what you've got here is the text. First of all, I'd like the team text to be much smaller (maybe the same length as the name?) Secondly, I'd like the text to not be corner locked. You could put it so that it ends over his shoulder. Keep it up!
  18. This might be one of my favorite pieces from you. Everything's working together really nicely, the lighting's good, and it looks really clean. Great sig!
  19. I love the vibrance of the blue, but I'm honestly not a fan of the "ng" being a different color. The BG is solid, I'd just like a little more interplay between the BG and the render. Nice piece
  20. @eaglesfan036
  21. @Bushitroll Sadly, not gonna be able to do this. Got hit hard with RL stuff. Hopefully I can do the next one.
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