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Exlaxchronicles

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  1. Less than 6 shots per period for HC. And old man Kiaskov lays a beat down...nice!
  2. Pretty cool lookin SIG there. LOVE the retro player you've used and definitely nice choice of color scheme throughout the render. Even those colors have a retro feel to them. Nice idea having the player sandwiched between the flames. Also cool how the background has a black/brown hue to it. The player has a slight out of focus look to him in comparison with the rest of the render which I like. Good placement of the font with size differential between the two names. And the black border around the font helps with contrast from the back drop. 6/6 Would've given you 6.5/6 if it was a Kiaskov SIG!/?
  3. Hey Dill: You gotta crawl before you run man, just like starting off with these. Anyways, it would've been cool to maybe see a darker border around the whole SIG to frame it off better. I like how you have the main player more in focus than the rest of the background. The over all lighting is good, the colors are richly saturated bit not too much and you have nice contrast with it all. Font wise its not a bad style at all and I like the color hue with the too font, as it coincides with the rest of the SIG color. Your bottom font color blend from left to right is a nice touch. What I would have changed somewhat is to try and match your color scheme like the green side more is. two end letters yellow, and fade the sac like you did with the Las. I'm just being a picky prick though. Overall def not a bad start! Keep em coming!
  4. STK: What software are you using to make this? Review: Not too bad at all. I think a nice colored border would add to the aesthetics of the whole render. As it is, this is a simple render in cartoon styled format. Little things you could improve upon to give it more flair...add some background color to the dull grey for aesthetics, throw in a logo on the helmet or somewhere on the background etc. Decent styled font but maybe the bottom words could be a little closer to the top ones, then you could fill that grey void at the bottom. Nice use of the colors to contrast each other. Dont be afraid to mix things up and be more creative!
  5. Once again nice read! Your two posts on attribute analysis should be added to the " Create A Player " thread as a must read part of the tutorial.
  6. I'm surprised Kovalev is sucking so bad this year. Is Laflamme even around to update?
  7. Well I can't critique this negatively in any way cuz as they say "Don't bite the hand that feeds ya"..... TPE. Anyways, this is a fricken beaut. The Tesla style electrical star gate or whatever the hell that is looks pretty cool against a jet black background. Has cool color to it with a softer focus compared to the player and back drop...nice! Player and two styled font become the center of attention and their placement is in a good position. I think good lighting, contrast, saturation and hue throughout the whole SIG. Two style fonts with enough contrast and decent choice of colors make em stand out from the background. It helped with the white border around Wilson to pop against the darker back drop. A total beaut but I'm only gonna give you 5.75/6 because it wasn't a Kiaskov SIG. ?
  8. Hey Joey...nice job on the endorsement logo! Only if it was a very slight touch lighter it would match the blue on the uniform perfectly. Also nice placement and its centered real well. Pretty good job on the blending as well bit could use a pinch of grey into the blend around the logo. Its hard to do for sure. Decent style of font for his name but could be moved up just a touch I think. You have a bit of bleed from the blue on the boards onto the name but no biggie. I'm thinking your along the lines of how Arthur started out with his Tristan Iseault SIG's. I can see you getting really good at these! Next time don't be afraid to add more creativity to your future SIG's. As is...pretty good start.
  9. I'm retro. Nothing like landing in the Bermuda Triangle.?
  10. Nice clear stock pic to work with. Lynx logo looks decent where you've placed it. Might look a little more aesthetically pleasing lowered a touch more? I don't know, but you've cropped it pretty damn good. Decent styled font and the white contrasts enough against the darker background. As it is, there's not much else to critique on to your SIG. Dont be afraid to be more creative with your future work and start adding more effort to your art. I look forward to seeing your next piece.
  11. Its an awesome stock pick I must say that! Since this is probably some of your first SIG designs, I'd like to say don't be afraid to experiment and use your imagination with whatever software youve used to make this SIG. As it is, the SC logo on the top left is decent looking. Other than that there's not much else to comment on because you've added nothing else to the picture. Dont be afraid next time to add filters, exposures, colors etc to your next work. I can't really give you a rating on this SIG because its just a stock pic with an added logo. Good start though but try and expand on your future SIG's.☺
  12. Your deviating from your normal style of design which is nice to see. Nice layering of the red and orange onto the black background. Not so much a fan of the word in red layered onto the orange, too close in color, and I think it looks out of place. Good looking two styled fonts on the bottom right with size differential. Its legible to read but a little too close again in color. Maybe a different colored border around "Iseault" would contrast it more and a border around the first name would help as well. Logo change...yes! Pretty well done as well. Like how you've layered the orange over his right shoulder too. Everything has just enough sharpness, nice saturation, lighting(lil too bright with the white for me) to give just separation and contrast. Good to see your progressing with your SIG's! Yuck on the word hate but you've still.knocked this one outta the park! She's a beaut!
  13. Where did our third period go boys'...we aren't gonna win any cup with no fricken defence!
  14. I second that! Still hatin on Calgary. I think we need to be better on defence,esp come playoff time.
  15. 6. If you had hockey groupies and you were gonna score with one of em after a game,would you hope to dive into a 60's hairy bush or fly on to a smooth runway?
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