This is definitely something different from your norm and I like that you're trying some crazy stuff out to see what sticks, kudos for that. The colouring is pretty crazy but works decently well. I would like to see maybe a bit more darkness on his right side (our left) to make the lighting work better contrast wise but it's not bad. Text is unfortunately a bit of an eyesore here. Not really sure what I would do to fix that but it needs a bit of something to work better; the black bar just stands out way too much. Maybe just go with a bigger font; just the last name, in balk, and slap it on the shoulder with some effects to blend it in a bit.