Bobo 514 Posted February 16, 2021 Share Posted February 16, 2021 (edited) "Victory Never Sleeps" LINK TO NEWSPAPER Spoiler TAGS: @fromtheinside @Ledge_and_Dairy @Spence King @thadthrasher @Zetterberg @KaleebtheMighty @ATST Edited February 16, 2021 by dariusmarimotoman MMFLEX, Blazzer, fishy and 11 others 7 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laine 1,361 Posted February 16, 2021 Share Posted February 16, 2021 8 minutes ago, dariusmarimotoman said: "Victory Never Sleeps" LINK TO NEWSPAPER Reveal hidden contents TAGS: @fromtheinside @Ledge_and_Dairy @Spence King @thadthrasher @Zetterberg @KaleebtheMighty @ATST Review: Wow! This is incredible! I love the style of the doc to make it look like a real newspaper. The smaller details such as the weather and enlarged first letters add to it. The visuals are simply stunning, and the way you break the news and games is awesome! 10/10 Bobo 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobo 514 Posted February 16, 2021 Author Share Posted February 16, 2021 (edited) 44 minutes ago, PatrikLaine said: Review: Wow! This is incredible! I love the style of the doc to make it look like a real newspaper. The smaller details such as the weather and enlarged first letters add to it. The visuals are simply stunning, and the way you break the news and games is awesome! 10/10 Thanks, means a lot coming from you Laine. Glad you liked our format! They call those enlarged words "Drop Cap" btw. Edited February 16, 2021 by dariusmarimotoman Laine 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Banackock 8,040 Posted February 17, 2021 Share Posted February 17, 2021 Excited to see how this progresses. Good work. Bobo 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishy 1,757 Posted February 17, 2021 Share Posted February 17, 2021 Great work on this, VHT team! I'm super pumped to finally have your first edition released. I'm looking forward to outstanding work from you in the near future! Bobo 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobo 514 Posted February 17, 2021 Author Share Posted February 17, 2021 Just now, Banackock said: Excited to see how this progresses. Good work. Thanks Bana. We really appreciate the kind words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobo 514 Posted February 17, 2021 Author Share Posted February 17, 2021 Just now, fishy said: Great work on this, VHT team! I'm super pumped to finally have your first edition released. I'm looking forward to outstanding work from you in the near future! Thanks Fishy! Welcome to our editing department BTW! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LilHCorny 55 Posted February 17, 2021 Share Posted February 17, 2021 Wow, amazing! Great work on this. This is terrific! Bobo 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobo 514 Posted February 17, 2021 Author Share Posted February 17, 2021 21 minutes ago, LilHCorny said: Wow, amazing! Great work on this. This is terrific! Thanks Lefty (Carnage Legend)! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a_Ferk 764 Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 On 2/16/2021 at 8:24 PM, dariusmarimotoman said: Thanks Lefty (Carnage Legend)! That's not lefty dude lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dom 1,445 Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 Wow thats really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobo 514 Posted February 18, 2021 Author Share Posted February 18, 2021 5 hours ago, a_Ferk said: That's not lefty dude lol oh really? huh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a_Ferk 764 Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 5 hours ago, dariusmarimotoman said: oh really? huh Yeah @Lefty_S is lefty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobo 514 Posted February 18, 2021 Author Share Posted February 18, 2021 1 hour ago, a_Ferk said: Yeah @Lefty_S is lefty oh he’s righty lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigAL 2,176 Posted February 21, 2021 Share Posted February 21, 2021 Review: Nice first edition! I like the well-written articles and neat graphics. I'm a bit confused on the graphic before the Vancouver-Seattle article ("North America RIVALRY: Game 453") because it has no other information other than a DC player and a Vancouver player. It really left me wanting to know more about the rivalry and the game (even showing the score or mentioning when it could be if its an ad for the future would be nice). One thing I really wish you included either in the initial forum post or in the first page is a table of contents. Most magazines have a cover, table of contents, and a message from the editor before diving right into the meat of it. If you're going for more of the newspaper vibe, a cool header that includes information about the issue number, date, and a preview of what's in the paper would be helpful. The feedback about it being a word doc is fair - maybe you could save it as a PDF to make it a bit cleaner? Overall, nice start, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobo 514 Posted February 21, 2021 Author Share Posted February 21, 2021 2 minutes ago, bigAL said: Review: Nice first edition! I like the well-written articles and neat graphics. I'm a bit confused on the graphic before the Vancouver-Seattle article ("North America RIVALRY: Game 453") because it has no other information other than a DC player and a Vancouver player. It really left me wanting to know more about the rivalry and the game (even showing the score or mentioning when it could be if its an ad for the future would be nice). One thing I really wish you included either in the initial forum post or in the first page is a table of contents. Most magazines have a cover, table of contents, and a message from the editor before diving right into the meat of it. If you're going for more of the newspaper vibe, a cool header that includes information about the issue number, date, and a preview of what's in the paper would be helpful. The feedback about it being a word doc is fair - maybe you could save it as a PDF to make it a bit cleaner? Overall, nice start, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes! I tried PDFs, couldn’t compress below 30 kb. And thanks for this constructive criticism. Much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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